Rough house sketch, rejected

This is part of the preparation of a new house portrait commission.  As part of getting ready, I often do some rough sketches, then forward them to the customer so they get a basic idea of what it will look like.  This is a quick sketch at an angle I liked, but the customer asked me for a more frontal view (the house is so broad across the front that I'll have to change the aspect ratio from what was planned, making it longer but not as tall.)  So this is the first sketch, done in black and white.  I have done a second one in walnut ink, which has been approved.  I'll try to get that posted soon.